“ there are many who argue that corn ethanol should replace fossil fuel gas as the primary source for running cars.”
不要在你的作文中写: “The author discusses howthere are many who argue that corn ethanol should replace fossil fuel gas as the primary source for running cars.”
加粗的部分是完全一样的,这是许多同学会犯的错误!
那么怎么写呢?我们可以对作者的观点进行阐述,进行paraphrase,例如可以这么写:“The author discusses the advantages of switching from fossil fuels to the alternative energy source: corn-based ethanol”
and then, first of all, firstly, in the first place, first and foremost,firstly, secondly, thirdly, next, after that, meanwhile, lastly, later, finally, while
阐述、添加想法
位置:
在正文中论述听力的要点
在解释你的理由时,通常是正文的第二句话
在阐述例子时
above all, actually, additionally, as well as, as a matter of fact, in addition, believe it or not, furthermore, indeed, in fact, just as, moreover
举例说明
位置:
介绍你的个人例子或轶事时
as an illustration, for example, for instance, I remember when, such as
显示因果关系
位置:
在正文结尾处和/或将您的故事与主题相关时,在每个正文段落的末尾
as a result, because, consequently, due to, hence, so, therefore, thus, for this reason
对比
位置:
在每个段落中介绍听力段落的观点时
在介绍和结论中认识相反的论点
although, at the same time, but, contrary to, even though, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, on the other hand, still, when in fact, yet, whereas, besides, despite the fact that, conversely
总结
位置:
结论段落/每个正文段落的最后一句
all in all, as noted above, finally, in conclusion, in short, in the end, on the whole, to conclude, to sum up